Speech

I am writing my speech on the changes of technology. Here is my opening paragraph:

When I was three, my parents had an old computer. It was big, and it needed to be plugged into the wifi, and a power source ALL THE TIME. My dad had a flip phone, and I don’t think my mum had a phone at all. Our TV had aerials on the top, and it was pretty much impossible for me to find something to watch.

Then, when I was six, my mum got a laptop for her birthday. We didn’t have wireless wifi yet, but the laptop was so much different from the old computer. It was faster. Better. Sleeker. My parents both got Nokia phones. We got a satellite TV, and I got to have the old one in my room.

When I was eight, we still had the same computer, but I got one for school. My parents both got their first touch screen phones. And then we got another TV.

Now, at the age of eleven, we have two TVs, one of which are 3d, and can be connected to the internet. My dad has an iPhone 6s, and my mum has the Samsung Galaxy J5. I have an iPod Touch, and my mum also has a tablet. My dad has a new HP laptop.

Throughout the years of my life, the level of technology in my house has been growing. In the space of 8 years, we went from 3 “old fashioned” devices to 7 state of the art devices.

I think that my speech is going good so far. I still have to think about the way I present my speech, and I'm also not really sure where to go next.