My name is Elaina and I am a Year 8 student at Ngatea Primary School. I enjoy swimming, music, reading, film making and art.

Sunday, 24 July 2016

News Report: Kaelum's Holiday

Kaelum hung out with his friends Liam, Jemma and Jemma's friend on the streets. They went to get some food at the bakery, and Kaelum nearly lost his phone. Someone threw Liam's ball in the river, and they all had to get it. They were all jumping in, trying to retrieve the ball. The ball kept going further down the river and then it reached a wider part of the river that didn't look deep, but when you got in it sunk.

Raiden was there with Kaelum, and they were daring each other to do stupid things. They dared each other to run into the fence as fast as they could, and they both got covered in scratches. They all continued playing around the water, and sometimes they fell in. Liam got his new shoes soaked.



3 comments:

  1. You described my holiday perfectly

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  2. Nice description I bet Kaelum got into some trouble.

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  3. Very Detailed writing it told a lot about what he did

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